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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 04:24, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
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- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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Infobox
[edit]- Put specifics in recording location, instead of "Various locations in the United States"
Lead
[edit]- Two album cuts, "To Know You" and "Joyful, Joyful", also appeared on the Christian Songs chart, peaking at Nos. 27 and 3, respectively. → Replace "Nos." with "numbers"
Background and songwriting
[edit]- No issues
Composition
[edit]- ...as 'pure American rock',[6] 'soft adult contemporary',[3] and 'CCM';[6] → Put period at end of "CCM"
- One critic observed that most of the songs on the album... → Start the sentence with the name of the critic
- Another theme present throughout the album i... → Not a complete thought and without a source
- Whoops, brainfart there. Removed. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
- Combine two subsections into one section as both are two small to warrant subsections
Release and sales
[edit]- Billboard magazine ranked Until the Whole World Hears as the best-selling Christian album and the 37th best-selling album overall of 2011.[13][14] It also ranked as the 3rd best-selling Christian album and the 137th best-selling album overall of 2011.[15][16] → Combine sentences into paragraph above in section
- Subsection is not necessary; put "Singles" information in second paragraph of section
Reception
[edit]- Debra Akins of Gospel Music Channel.com said the album... → Wiki-link entire phrase of "Gospel Music Channel"
- Fixed - I thought it winkilinked '.com' add-ons, but I guess it doesn't. Toa Nidhiki05 14:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
Track listing
[edit]- No issues
Personnel
[edit]- No issues
Charts and certifications
[edit]- No issues
References
[edit]- Reference 1 → "Gospel Music Channel.com" should not be italicized and should also just be "Gospel Music Channel"
- Reference 4 → Provide the actual external link to verify information that comes from this source
- Aside from linking to the google books page, I switched the template to a 'cite journal' template to represent it being a magazine. Toa Nidhiki05 15:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
- References 9, 17, 18, 24 → "Billboard" and "Prometheus Global Media" do not need to be wiki-linked as they were before
- Reference 10 → Provide actual URL to support information brought on by source
- References 12, 19 → "Jesus Freak Hideout" should be publisher and not italicized or wiki-linked; John DiBiase should be put as author of article
- Fixed
- Reference 21 → "Allmusic" should not be italicized
- Reference 23 → "The Tennessean" and "Gannett Company" should not be italicized
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put this article on hold. There are some minor prose issues and citation format issues that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these issues and/or address issues you believe do not concern the good article criteria. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 05:22, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
- Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 (talk2me) 22:33, 20 June 2012 (UTC)