Talk:Untitled (Hodgy Beats EP)/GA1
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 11:26, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- "Lyrically the record features lyrics about self-refection" - How about "Lyrically the record deals with..." or similar, to avoid repetition
- "The EP was announced on Hodgy Beats' official Twitter account on February 20 2012 " - comma missing
- "It features no production from Odd Future producers," - how about "Unlike in the previous records (if that is true), Odd Future did not contribute in the production" or "Odd Future did not play a role in the production"
- Why is "Plies" in italics?
- a (prose):
- All corrected.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Corrected
I believe your concerns have been corrected properly. Bruce Campbell (talk) 20:08, 10 August 2012 (UTC)