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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 10:55, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • The infobox title is wrong.
    • Fixed.
  • "1773-1776" (in infobox) → en-dash
    • Fixed.
  • The lead is very short, you could incorporate some more of the reception and what the song is about.
    • Good idea, done.
  • Maybe put the audio file in the infobox.
    • No thanks! I think it is always best in the 'Music' section.
  • "Swedish song tradition" → "Swedish ballad tradition"
    • Fixed.
  • "influence in Swedish music" → "influence on Swedish music"
    • It means from within, it's not an external influence.
  • "1712 or 1713 – 1767" → Should the spaces be there?
    • It seems best to me, as the range possibly includes 1712 here.
  • Rococo is capitalized in its article.
    • Fixed.
  • Ref 5 link is broken.
    • The Bellman Society site seems to be infected by a virus, I'm sure it'll be back soon, but I've added an archive link and marked it as 'dead' for now.

@AryKun: – Thanks for the review! All done to date.Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]