Talk:Valentine's Day (The Office)/GA1

GA Review

Looking nice so far. Some suggestions for improvement:

Done --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Written by Michael Schur, and directed by Greg Daniels -- no need for comma here.

Removed --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Maybe mention something about reception in the lead, and give a brief overview of the plot.

Done --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Jan kisses him then groans -- "and then"; 'then' by itself is not a conjunction.

Changed --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

No need to wikilink Greg Daniels in the second paragraph of Production, it's linked just above.

Fixed --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The writers didn't have a punchline in the scene -- avoid contractions; "did not".

Done --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The whole section about the Dwight bobbleheads should probably be moved from Production to Reception -- it's the fans' reaction, no?

Moved --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Linked --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Removed --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 23:53, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Otherwise, looking good. You've got a week to make changes, so good luck. —97198 talk 06:36, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Awesome. I'm happy to go ahead and promote to GA status. —97198 talk 00:35, 16 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]