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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:45, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
- Lead
- Add a short description.
Done
- Add a comma after "safely".
Done
- Add a comma after "heroism".
Done
- Body
- "he family" → "his family"
Done
- "Haughland" → "Haugland"
Done
- "he were starving" → "he was starving"
Done
- "behind from him" - is "from" necessary?
Done
- Add a comma after "fifth day in the jungle".
Done
- "a heavy rain" → "heavy rain"
Done
- "there was rocks falling" → "rocks were falling"
Done
- "rain storm" should be written as one word.
Done
- "cloths" - typo?
Done
- "day by day" → "day-by-day"
Done
- Add a comma after "local tribesmen".
Done
- Add a serial comma after The Nation.
Done
- "NASA, retirement and death" → "NASA, retirement, and death"
Done
- #Selected_works need citations for verification.
Done
- References
- Wikilink websites/works where possible.
- Is "Typewriter The Wonderful World of Typewriters" (a Blogspot) reliable?
- Archive sources (manually or with this automatic tool) where possible.
- Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:24, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:48, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Everything looks great now! Passing the article.
Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:08, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- Everything looks great now! Passing the article.