Talk:ViSalus/Archives/2016

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Unsourced info about early history

In July an IP re-added info about the early history of the company. [1]. Although this info is possibly useful, it is completely lacking any sources. It's also written in a non-neutral way. ("fledgling company", etc.) so I have reverted to an older version. The two versions don't quite match, but this one has sourced, so let's go with that. Grayfell (talk) 20:15, 23 September 2014 (UTC)

@Facts80210: Hello. For some reason, the Michgan.gov links are not loading for me, but regardless, interpreting WP:PRIMARY government documents is usually considered original research. Because such documents are notoriously difficult to interpret, they are of limited use here, unfortunately. Since we have a secondary source stating that Mallen and Sarnicola were the founders, we should not use "scare quotes" to describe them, and we should instead explain what's happening based on reliable sources. Grayfell (talk) 23:19, 17 September 2016 (UTC)