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I have updated the dates, and touched up some cites. Alaney2k (talk) 23:55, 30 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Here's some more for you:

  • "rich, English, industrialists" - excessive commas.
  • Some "is"'s need changed to "was"'s in the Building section.
  • "An quote" → "A quote"
  • When explaining the nine man limit, the fact that there were no substitutions could probably be added into the sentence rather than in parenthesis.
  • I understand the "slapshot north" reference in Location Today, but casual reader may not.
  • Section headers don't have two capitals per WP:MOS - Current Events and Location Today.
  • ISBN for other books?

Hope that helps. Grsztalk 19:58, 1 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Several of the books predate the ISBN system. I have put the ones in that do have them. Alaney2k (talk) 21:55, 1 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I think I have most of these things covered. I am going to check out a few books on Montreal history. Alaney2k (talk) 23:35, 1 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I guess that's true, I wasn't sure. GrszX 16:22, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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