Talk:Vilayet Printing House (Sarajevo)

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A fact from Vilayet Printing House (Sarajevo) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 2 June 2015 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the first newspaper to be printed in Bosnia and Herzegovina, issued by Sopron's Printing House, had "a decidedly Serb orientation", while its owner and editor was an ethnic German?

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:58, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will take this one. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 14:58, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Ottoman Empire known as the Tanzimat Better write "Ottoman Empire (known as the Tanzimat)"
I think vilayet should be in italics throughout the article as it is a foreign word. It should be linked/explained in the lead

Background

Link Bosnia and Herzegovina

Under Sopron

Link Ignjat Sopron

Under the vilayet government

Its subsequent directors were incompetent I think we had better say "not very capable", the present wording may be a bit too strong.
Duplink: Principality of Serbia

No copyvio detected, sources fine, the text is very well written and the images suffice. That should be all. Good luck! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 17:35, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 18:43, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Sainsf: No prob, just notify me when you're ready. 23 editor (talk) 01:09, 31 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@23 editor: Read the article once again. The prose is very well-written, and I have no more comments. Please ping me when you are done with the points above; these done, I would be happy to pass the article. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 09:58, 31 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Sainsf: I already dealt with all the points you brought up. 23 editor (talk) 12:51, 31 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you... did not notice they were done. This is a great job, I am pleased to promote this. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 12:56, 31 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]