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This biography has several areas of concern. First it definitely contains WP:PEACOCK terms. "...very respected and influential, even among some of his enemies..." This definitely needs a citation, and saying someone is "respected" isn't quantifiable. Let's stick to the facts. There are some inflammatory words, most notably "homicidal" and per WP:LABEL something else should be used. As a biography of someone well known, surely there most be sources beyond the fact that he received Order of Duke Trpimir. Additionally, as a writer surely his works were criticized, both positively and negatively. We have an article about an author without any critical reception of his works. Additionally, the number of deaths associated with Bleiburg massacre is questionable at best. He says 200,000 and all Croat emigrants agree with this? WP:PROVEIT. AniMate19:33, 14 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
