Talk:Warlocked/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Dr Salvus (talk · contribs) 18:23, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Hey. I've decided that this would be my first GA review ever. I'm gonna review this tomorrow. Dr Salvus 18:23, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria Notes Result
(a) (prose) The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
(b) (MoS) The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
  • Verifiable with no original research:
  • Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (references) The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
    (b) (citations to reliable sources) The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
    (c) (original research) The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
    (d) (copyvio and plagiarism) The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
  • Broad in its coverage:
  • Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (major aspects) The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
    (b) (focused) The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
  • Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  • Notes Result
    The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
  • Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
  • Notes Result
    The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
  • Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  • Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass
    (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) The reviewer has left no comments here Pass Pass

    Result[edit]

    Result Notes
    Pass Pass The reviewer has left no comments here


    Discussion[edit]

    @GamerPro64:, you've litteraly written an excellent article. Unfortunatley, not being a native speaker, I'll have to review the grammar tomorrow (and I'll be helped by a friend who's got a better English). It's my first review, so I apologise for possible errors. Do remember to add a caption as the photo doesn't have it. Dr Salvus 21:42, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

    What do you mean the photo does have a caption. GamerPro64 21:47, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    GamerPro64, oh sorry, hadn't seen it Dr Salvus 21:48, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    @GamerPro64 today, I'm very sick (I may have contracted Covid), so won't be able to review the grammar for a few days. Dr Salvus 16:32, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    @GamerPro64, I'm fine enough to do this and I'm 99,9% asyntomatic. These are my friend's grammatical corrections.
    • Music for Warlocked was composed by Jeroen Tel. -> The music for Warlocked was composed by Jeroen Tel.
    • A sequel was planned for the Game Boy Advance titled Wizards but was cancelled. -> A sequel was planned for the Game Boy Advance titled Wizards but it was cancelled.
    • The studio later went on to make unrelated games for other consoles [...] -> The studio continued to make unrelated games for other consoles [...]
    That's what I've got. Dr Salvus 19:11, 2 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    All done. GamerPro64 04:06, 3 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    @Dr Salvus Thank you for your GA Review, I appreciate you resolving the issue of the previous review I left. PerryPerryD Talk To Me 19:54, 3 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Comments from BlackShadowG[edit]

    Hi, @GamerPro64:, I have translated the entire article into Chinese and nominated a GAC there as well. Our editors found that the "Development and release" section is too short, I think these two sources [1][2] may be helpful in writing this section. --BlackShadowG (talk) 04:16, 3 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]