Talk:Washington State Route 162/GA1
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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 03:11, 4 February 2013 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- The route description has a lot of long and choppy sentences such as "The highway continues south through rural Pierce County, following a Ballard Terminal Railroad line and the Pierce County Foothills Trail to the west and the Puyallup River to the east,[5][6] serving the community of Alderton." and "SR 162 crosses the Puyallup River on the McMillin Bridge, listed on the National Register of Historical Places,[8] west of its confluence with the Carbon River and becomes Washington Avenue, traveling southeast through Orting and serving Orting High School." I would suggest either rewording or splitting them.
- Split and reworded
- The sentence "The McMillin Bridge is being replaced by WSDOT with a newer, wider span over the Puyallup River scheduled for construction in 2014 because of the older bridge showing signs of deterioration due to age." needs to be reworded and split.
- Moved deteriorating to describe the bridge (in front) and removed the last section
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- Is it really important to mention repaving and the installation of guardrails in the history?
- No other work has been done to the highway and will be done (except the bridge replacement).
- Is it really important to mention repaving and the installation of guardrails in the history?
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
I will place the article on hold for a couple fixes to be made. Dough4872 03:20, 4 February 2013 (UTC)
- Responded to your comments. SounderBruce 06:10, 4 February 2013 (UTC)
- I will now pass the article. Dough4872 15:36, 4 February 2013 (UTC)