Talk:Weeds (Millennium)

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March 2, 2012Good article nomineeListed
July 26, 2012Good topic candidatePromoted
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on March 9, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the setting of the Millennium episode "Weeds" "simmers with recrimination and vigilantism"?
Current status: Good article

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:28, 1 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

OK, just a few issues:

  • Intro: 'neighbourhood' should be spelled 'neighborhood'
  • Intro: remove the semicolon after 'series'
  • Intro: "The episode begins with a quote from the Book of Jeremiah; and received mixed reviews, touching mostly on its interesting plot and poorly-executed characters." Rewrite into "The episode, which begins with a quote from the *Book of Jeremiah, received mixed reviews, with most reviews complimenting the interesting, but poorly-executed plot."
  • Plot: "Black also receives post containing a paint swatch with the number 528 on it, but it unsure of its meaning." Change to "Black also receives post containing a paint swatch with the number 528 on it, but he is unsure of its meaning."
  • Plot: "Comstock's son was returned after he revealed his affair, while Orlando's son was killed because he kept a crime involving money a secret" Commas after 'crime' and 'money'
  • Plot: I would remove the 'it was' in: "The boy is rescued, and killer is found and arrested—it was Edward Petey"

On hold for seven days to straighten out the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 17:30, 1 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I took your suggestions but tweaked some of them a little (diff). Thanks again for reviewing these articles. GRAPPLE X 07:07, 2 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
No problem! Everything looks in order. I pass.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:03, 2 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]