Talk:Weeping Willow (Law & Order: Criminal Intent)/GA1

GA Review

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The article looks good, but it needs some work before I can pass it as a Good Article. Here's my comments:

• Unlink the date in the infobox.
• In the lead, could you add what network it aired on and in which country (I'm guessing the United States)?
• The story and the WeepingWillow17 character were
• Link Godere, Noth, Nicholson, Pascal, and Oswalt in the plot section (if they have their own articles on Wikipedia), and include their full names.
  • I added full names on all, and wikilinks for the ones with articles. — Hunter Kahn _(contribs) 14:46, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
• kill them both if 100,000 people don't do not purchase
• In response to Wheeler's video, the kidnappers make another vlog
• The citations in the article should use appropriate cite templates such as {{Cite web}} and {{Cite news}}.
• My biggest problem with the article is that the whole Cultural references section lacks references. If there aren't any available, I think you should delete it.
• This link doesn't seem to work.

I'll put the article on hold for seven days so that you can fix this. Good luck! :) TheLeftorium 13:19, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

• Ok, I think I've addressed them all, except for the "Cultural references" section. Unfortunately, yeah, there really aren't any references for them, these are all things straight from the episode itself. I was under the impression that in such cases there wasn't a citation needed because the television show itself is the source, like in the case of plot sections, as long as I wasn't doing original research like writing about the episode's hidden theme. If I'm wrong about this, though, let me know and I'll remove the section, or you can remove it yourself. Thanks for the INCREDIBLY quick review! lol — Hunter Kahn _(contribs) 14:43, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
• Also, the song mentioned in Cultural references is listed in the show's credits. If the section has to go, I guess I could move that one up to "Production" and cite the episode's credits? Or that could go too if need be... — Hunter Kahn _(contribs) 14:45, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

• Even though they're not very reliable, you can use these two links: [1] and [2], as sources in the Cultural references section. —TheLeftorium 16:40, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
  • Added the sources, and removed anything from Cultural References that weren't listed at one of these two sources. — Hunter Kahn _(contribs) 16:53, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
    • Looks good, I will pass the article now. :) TheLeftorium 17:08, 15 March 2009 (UTC)