Talk:2006 Westchester County tornado/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Just a few comments here:

  • "The Westchester Tornado was an unusual F2 tornado that touched down in Rockland County, New York on July 12, 2006."
    • Now, this could be different for storm related articles so feel free to ignore this, but generally we're supposed to avoid using adjectives like that in opening sentences.
  • While on the topic, after reading the article, I didn't find anything that backed up the statement that it was unusual. Perhaps you could add a sentence for those of us that know little about weather why it was unusual?

I made a few minor fixes. It looks very good. Once those issues are addressed, I'll pass it. -- Scorpion0422 02:21, 3 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The word has been removed. Passed. -- Scorpion0422 03:22, 3 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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