Talk:Wherever I Go (Hannah Montana)

Re-ordered sections

I have re-ordered the sections in the article as per MOS:TV, but there are several that should be included and one that MS:TV doesn't mention. I was tempted to remove it but I thought I would first ask, what exactly is the purpose of the "Cultural references" section in this article? Other than listing references made in the episode, which seems fancrufty/trivial, it seems to have no real purpose. The first episode (Lilly, Do You Want to Know a Secret?) includes a "Cultural references" section that seems more appropriately composed than the one here. Another issue is use of IMDB references. While IMDB is generally fine for the external links section, it's not a reliable source for episodic content (even if the information is correct!) so shouldn't be used. --AussieLegend (talk) 05:58, 18 January 2011 (UTC)

The bulleted list for the "Cultural references" was just used as a placeholder. I'll expand it and compose it like the first episode. --DisneyFriends (talk) 14:24, 18 January 2011 (UTC)

Added the little part of that ending of series finale

OKay so you dont want me to add the sweater part i understand but the last part where the scene ends with lilys phota collage with mileys friendship over the years should stay right? ~~Belrein12~~ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Belrien12 (talk • contribs) 13:31, 11 March 2011 (UTC)

Not as you've been adding it, it shouldn't. As I indicated in the last revert, it has issues with wording, spelling, improper capitalisation and formatting that are definitely unencyclopaedic. --AussieLegend (talk) 13:45, 11 March 2011 (UTC)

Try as you might but ill keep editing them unitl you accept them. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Belrien12 (talk • contribs) 10:34, 12 March 2011 (UTC)

You can try, but you'll just end up being blocked for edit-warring. You need to discuss the edits since 3 other editors disagree with you. Bulldozing them into the article like this is not going to work. --AussieLegend (talk) 11:04, 12 March 2011 (UTC)

For petes sake whats wrongwith sweater part and the last shot of lilyspictures? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Belrien12 (talk • contribs) 11:14, 12 March 2011 (UTC)

As I indicated in my edit summary,[1] on your IP's talk page[2] and here,[3] the content has issues with wording, spelling, improper capitalisation and formatting that are definitely unencyclopaedic. That's just a start. The other editors who have reverted you may have other issues apart from those. --AussieLegend (talk) 11:53, 12 March 2011 (UTC)

Heres a little editing which i edit it later if you accept it but you have to improve it first : As Miley and Lily prepare for colledge ,Lily makes a Picture Collage of her and miley during their friendship over the years ,Miley receives a sweater from her dad which unfortunately has its sleeves too long for her arms,When suddenly after lily left, Miley gets an offer from Steven Spielberg and Tom Cruise to star in a movie. However, filming is in Paris, and will take a year, making her incapable of going to college with her best friend, Lilly. She keeps this from Lilly, and tries to get Lilly to come to the decision of not wanting to go to college with Miley, when they drive to Stanford University for a weekend orientation. Lilly, however, is just happy to be able to go to school with her best friend. Finally, Miley reveals the movie deal to Lilly, and they get into an argument, where Lilly says to Miley that she would never want to go anywhere with her again. On the car ride home, Lilly further declares that she is moving back in with her father. Distraught, Miley discusses her dilemma with Jackson, and he suggests that Miley should have asked for Lilly to join her in Paris. Miley then hugs Jackson, and Robby declares it a touching moment for him. Miley realizes that the real reason Lilly was upset was because they have done everything together, and Miley didn't ask Lilly to come with her to Paris. Miley then asks for Lilly to come with her to Paris, and they both decide to go to Paris together. Miley and Lilly's respective boyfriends, Jesse and Oliver, meet up with them at the airport to see them before their trip. Oliver gives Lilly some key words that force her to second guess her decision. Before getting onto the plane, Lilly tells Miley that she has decided to go to college after all, even if it means being without Miley. Miley and Lilly begin their lives apart backed by a duet sung by the two actresses. The music eventually centers in Lilly's dorm where she gets a knock on her door. She opens the door to reveal Miley (in her long sleeved university sweater from her dad), who declares, "I'm Miley, I'm your new roommate." Miley tells Lilly that there will always be movies, concerts, and tours for her to do, but she will only have one chance to go to college with her best friend. As the two Hug the last shot before fading to black shows lily and mileys photo colledges which lily hangs it on her dorm room wall. A montage of images from the course of the show is displayed through the credits with the song "I'll Always Remember You" as the series ends. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Belrien12 (talk • contribs) 17:23, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

I can't even read it because the grammar is so bad, I can't improve it if I don't even know what you're saying. I would like to keep the version that actually makes sense. 117Avenue (talk) 19:18, 14 March 2011 (UTC)

For petes sake,What i was trying to say is it starts in mileys house as lily making a Picture Collage of her and miley over the years and miley received a university sweater from her dad whose sleeves were too long for her,the series ends ends with miley returning to lily in her long sleeved university sweater and its last shot shows lilys Picture collage on the dorm wall. GOT IT ~~Belrein12~~

The issues that I earlier identified still exist. They need to be corrected BEFORE the content is added to the article and that's going to take a while becasue there are so many errors. Continuing to add the content as it is, is disruptive at best. --AussieLegend (talk) 14:23, 15 March 2011 (UTC)

I agree. While it can be considered valuable information, spelling and grammatical mistakes can turn a reader off from the article. It would not be professional and it could be very confusing for the reader. Making sure that the article is at its top quality will ensure that almost anyone can read the article and understand what we are hoping to get across. --DisneyFriends (talk) 19:08, 15 March 2011 (UTC)