Talk:Who Am I (Casting Crowns song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:43, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
- Info box
- Lead
- released on February 22, 2004 as → Need a comma after 2004
- Just use self-titled instead of eponymous
- from their debut album. → on the album.
- Background and recording
- The stray solo sentence should just be part of the paragraph
- kids → children, more formal.
- Rename this Background and composition and have the composition section as a second paragraph in this section.
- Reception
Have this all as one section with no sub-sectioning. Try avoid really small, short sections. It's okay to merge some things together. Otherwise it just looks sparse.
- Live performances and other uses
- Try and have two even paragraphs, the first one is massive and the second one is only two lines.
- Shouldn't really have this second audio file.
- Charts
- Certifications
- Should have it's own section, and try formatting it like this: [1]
- Status
Again,a fairly short article so not much to review or fix. On hold. — AARON • TALK 15:59, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
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