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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:05, 24 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "A limited number of EPs were produced" it would be better if we knew how many, as quite obviously it would have been impossible to produce an unlimited number.
  • "Among the three tracks is "Mercy""... I imagine for a couple of extra words, you could add the names of the other two tracks!
  • You have USEng (organizers) but BritEng dates (26 November 2010). Be consistent.
  • "on 26 November 2010 (Black Friday)" I don't think you need to reiterate Black Friday yet again.
  • " Because only 5000 copies were created, the availability to record stores was limited" again, it seems like stating the obvious here, but I know what you're trying to say.... can we re-phrase a bit?
  • Don't think you need to link roulette.
  • Any reason why Dublin and Brussels are linked and Paris isn't?

A few minor issues, I'll put it on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:03, 25 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]