Talk:Williamsburgh Savings Bank Tower/GA1
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Reviewer: Ganesha811 (talk · contribs) 14:02, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
Hi! I'll be reviewing this article, using the template below. Looking forward to reading it! —Ganesha811 (talk) 14:02, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
- Just to let you know, I will be away from the Internet from now until this Saturday and will not be able to complete the review until then. Apologies for the delay, but I expect we'll be able to wrap it up quickly next weekend! —Ganesha811 (talk) 18:01, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
- Returning to this review today. —Ganesha811 (talk) 13:11, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
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2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. |
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3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. |
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6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. |
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- Thanks for the comments. I see your point about the excessive detail, but I think you may have removed too much detail - for example, the ladies' lounge and the basement lobby weren't really discussed at all after these changes. I have also changed the images that you mentioned. Epicgenius (talk) 00:56, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
- Go ahead and restore some of the content about those two areas - just make sure to keep it a summary. Thanks for fixing the images. Assuming good faith that your restorations will not be excessive, this article meets the GA standard and passes! Congratulations to you and anyone else who worked on this article. —Ganesha811 (talk) 01:06, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.