Talk:Witchcraft in Orkney/GA1
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:16, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:16, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
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- No DAB links
- No Dead links
Prose Suggestions[edit]
- Witchcraft in Orkney possibly has its roots in the settlement of Norsemen on the archipelago from the eighth century onwards. suggest you start off with something like Witchcraft in Orkney is the practice of magic, especially black magic, that is practiced in Orkney.
- Sixty-eight people had been accused, the majority – around ninety percent – were women, a higher ratio than that recorded in the rest of the country. suggest During this time period, sixty-eight people were accused, the majority – around ninety percent – were women, a higher ratio than that recorded in the rest of the country.
- Any accusations levelled against men were all related to cases dealing with women. suggest All of the accusations levelled against men were related to cases dealing with women.
- @Eric Corbett: That is all my comments, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:40, 6 March 2018 (UTC)