Talk:Wooloo/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Brachy0008 (talk · contribs) 09:23, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Review

Hello! I will be reviewing the article. I am honoured to do so, as I’m kind of a Pokémon fan myself (guess my favourite Pokémon if you want to, but I can confirm it is not Wooloo). So far, the significant problem is the MoS violations.

Prose

• A mention of Shigeru Ohmori’s reaction to the critical reception of the Pokémon is not present in the prose, despite being in the lead.
  • It should be there, first paragraph of reception, by his last name.
    • Done!

Sources/Citations

• (Optional) Try adding secondary sources, but I’ll leave them be if such sources are not available. I helped you with one of them.
• The only concern, the overuse of FN 7 (primary source). It’s used four times on this page.
  • Should be fixed now. Fixed an oversight with a few missing accessdate.
    • Done.

Copy-vios

• Nothing special from Earwig, but I’ll let that 26.5% be.

Images

• So far, so good!
• (Optional) If you can, try adding more Wooloo pics.
  • I fear given the size of the article adding more than one might get called out for fair use rationale if I add another.
    • That’s why it’s optional

@Brachy0008: Everything should be addressed!--Kung Fu Man (talk) 10:06, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Very well then, I will pass it. Brachy08 _(Talk) 10:10, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

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