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GA Review

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
    You seem to be the only one who has edited it, so stable enough for me. Seeing as you are just improving it.--WillC 05:31, 23 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    It is possible to add images to the article. Add the Andrew Cohen image found in his article.--WillC 08:16, 25 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
Entire review
Will be starting the review shortly.--WillC 05:31, 23 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
This seems to be a list, why should it be a Good Article instead of a Featured List?--WillC 05:42, 23 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I'm doing this at 4 am, so the first few comments may make no sense considering I'm bored, tired, and do not feel like heading to bed just yet.--WillC 08:16, 25 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Lead
  • "The Casino Employees Championship is one of only three closed tournaments at the World Series of Poker." If the WSOP is a tournament, how can this be a tournament as well? Maybe it would be better to have it as "The Casino Employees Championship is one of only three closed tournaments at the World Series of Poker gathering."
  • "While most of the events are open to the general public, participants in the Ladies Championship, Seniors Championship, the Casino Employees Championship must meet certain eligibility requirements." → "While most of the events are open to the general public, participants in the Ladies Championship, Seniors Championship, and the Casino Employees Championship must meet certain eligibility requirements."
  • Lead seems a little small. Is this the standard for all or most articles of this kind?--WillC 08:16, 25 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
History
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WSOP Casino Employee Championship Events
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