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GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 00:27, 23 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Copyvio check

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Earwig says good to go. Quotations are used in-line with WP:COPYQUOTE.

Files

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All images used are relevant, high quality and copyright-free:

  • File:YEEZY GAP.png: good, valid public domain rationale;
  • File:YZY GAP, Chicago banner.jpg: good, CC-BY-SA 2.0. Although, I wish this was not in B&W but alas.

Prose

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  • "Yeezy Gap (stylized as YEEZY GAP)" – the name and stylisation should be boldfaced. Also: checkY
  • The logo is YZY; do the sources happen to say anything about this stylisation?
  • As far as I can see, except for a few fringe sources, everyone refers to the collaboration as "Yeezy Gap" or "YEEZY GAP" including Gap itself, the logo is just different as the Yeezy brand by itself is sometimes stylized as YZY.
  • Oh, I see!
  • The lead could definitely be expanded by a few sentences to summarise some more of its history. checkY
  • "deep interest in Gap for years" – wikilink Gap. checkY
  • Wikilink Steve Jobs. checkY
  • "In 2009, West was set to collaborate with Gap, but the collaboration fell through." – is there anymore information on this?
  • There is not much information about the details of the collaboration, but I did elaborate on why it fell through.
  • Thanks, that info looks sufficient nonetheless.
  • Two quotes in the article use curved quotation marks whilst the rest use standard ones (or whatever these " are called).
  • Fixed
  • "up to 8.5 million common stock shares of Gap" – wikilink common stock. checkY
  • Remove the ordinals (th) in the dates per MOS:DATESNO. checkY
  • "West's 2021 album "Donda" doubled" – album titles are spelled with italics without quotations. checkY
  • "in the history of Gap.com." – I presume this means in the history of Gap's online sales? If so, rephrase to make this more clear IMO. checkY
  • "that 70% of customers" – change to "70 percent" per MOS:%.checkY
  • Italicise Donda 2. checkY
  • "It contained accessories such as bags and hats alongside regular clothing." – needs a citation. checkY

Refs

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Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 4, 9, 14, 15, 22 or 24.

  • A few of the citations are missing publication dates.
  • Fixed
  • Refs 5 and 15 are missing author names. I believe both were written by Jake Silbert?
  • Fixed
  • Refs 7 and 20 should not be URLs but publication names.
  • Fixed
  • Ref 12 is unusable per WP:PAGESIX. Try to find an alternative RS source. Speaking of: checkY
  • Per WP:TMZ, is there a better source available for ref 17?
  • Better source found

Other

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Infobox, Notes, short description, nav and cats good.

  • Doesn't seem to be anything that quite fits, as most are about companies established in 2020, Yeezy Gap was not a company.
  • That is okay.

@LunaEatsTuna: I think that's everything! Thanks for taking the time to review ULPS (talk) 20:09, 23 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.