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Closing and collapsing an abandoned Good Article review. Safiel (talk) 19:20, 19 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:47, 12 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there! Review of this coming soon... Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:47, 12 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • by Bruno Mars, Philip Lawrence and Ari Levine, Jeff Bhasker, and Emile Haynie -> by The Smeezingtons and Emile Haynie
  • and reminiscent of the song "It Will Rain" and Lana Del Rey's work -> It is reminiscent of his previous song, "It Will Rain" and was noted by critics for its similarities to Lana Del Rey's works.
  • Its music is largely -> Its instrumentation is mainly
  • to Contemporary hit radio -> to contemporary hit radio
  • complex instrumental -> complex instrumentation
  • record -> recording; record is generally used for album releases
  • Its lyrics, detail the fact of the singer being unable to resist to his attraction to young girls were met with criticism; with reviewers calling it a "recognizing sin" and "impassioned shame" -> Its lyrics, portraying the singer's attraction to young girls, were met with criticism...
  • in some -> in few
  • the released -> the release
  • Korea where it succeed by peaking a the top position -> Korea, where it reached number one
  • as the second single -> as the second single release for Unorthodox Jukebox
  • at 62 and 23 -> at number 63 and number 23
  • the position of 19 -> the top twenty
  • and 32 -> and number 32
  • certified gold -> certified Gold
  • the US -> that territory
  • The track was performed live sometimes -> The track was performed several times live, including
The song was only performed three times live, that doesn't account for several...maybe other word? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:24, 18 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Background and writing
  • Link MTV to its own article
  • interview Mars -> interview, Mars

More to come... Cartoon network freak (talk) 14:04, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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