Talk:Yvon Cormier/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman 03:42, 4 December 2009 (UTC) This is overall a good article, though I do have a couple issues:[reply]

"Cormier was born into a family of thirteen children, of which four of the brothers became professional wrestlers, and another became a referee." Is there a name for his ref brother?
"He gained a different title the following year, however, when he teamed with Bob Sweetan to defeat the Christy Brothers (Bobby and Jerry) on July 12, 1967." Mentioning the belt name would be nice.
"Four weeks after dropping it to Sweetan and Pomeroy, he regained the title from them with the help of his new partner Archie Gouldie" round here i'm getting confused as to what specific title he's competing for.
"At one point, he wrestled Giant Baba in Japan in front of a crowd of 45,000 people. He also participated in numerous chain matches." Explain what a chain match is.

I'll put the article on hold and will pass upon completion of the fixes. Wizardman 03:42, 4 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. I have made changes to each of these places in the article. Please let me know if anything else is needed. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:08, 4 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Looks goodnow, so it passes as a GA. Wizardman 15:52, 4 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]