Talk:Zach Hankins/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:50, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Am reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:50, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for the speedy review. Did not expect one this quick. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Early life and high school career
[edit]- Wikilink points, rebounds and shooting to their respective articles to help those unfamiliar with basketball
- OK. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- "In the fall of 2013," - please avoid mentioning seasons per MOS:SEASON
- So I should just say 2013? ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Preferably state the month Hankins injured his left foot or late 2013 MWright96 (talk) 19:29, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Changed to late 2013, as I can't find the month but I think it was October. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 21:06, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Preferably state the month Hankins injured his left foot or late 2013 MWright96 (talk) 19:29, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- So I should just say 2013? ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- "Hankins was running up the floor and stopped abruptly, breaking his foot." - you can say it was the left foot Hankins broke as stated by The Detroit News
- Clarified. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- "so he committed to the Bulldogs." - make it clear that Hankins committed to playing college basketball for the Bulldogs.
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:24, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
College career
[edit]- Wikilink Bevo Francis Award
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Wikilink block to Block (basketball) on the first time the term is mentioned and field goal percentage
- Done and I already linked field goal percentage. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- "for top small college player" - for the top
- Good catch. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Wikilink National Player of the Year to NABC Player of the Year
- OK. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Add a link to most valuable player for non-Basketball readers
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- "but stuck with new coach Travis Steele after Steele said Hankins was still a priority. " - remained
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- "He led the Musketeers to a 19-16 record and had 13 points, nine rebounds and two assists in a 78-76 overtime loss" - replace the hyphens with en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
- OK. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- "in the second round of the NIT." - the 2019 National Invitation Tournament.7
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:30, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
References
[edit]- Reference 6: "Ferris State basketball wins Division II national championship, 71-69"." - en dash please
- Fixed. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:37, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to action/respond to the queries raised here. MWright96 (talk) 16:58, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- I have addressed your concerns. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 18:37, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Editorofthewiki: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 05:04, 8 April 2020 (UTC)