Template:Did you know nominations/1919 Norfolk race riot
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 14:48, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
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1919 Norfolk race riot
- ... that during a July 21, 1919, homecoming celebration for African-American veterans of World War I, a race riot broke out in Norfolk, Virginia? Source: "Six Shot In Race Riot at Norfolk" [1]
- Reviewed: Alexandre Kantorow
Created by Thats Just Great (talk). Self-nominated at 18:34, 5 July 2019 (UTC).
- Could this appear on July 21, 2019? -- Thats Just Great (talk) 18:40, 5 July 2019 (UTC)
- Comment Article needs some amount of copyediting. Some sentences seem abrupt or don't have a meaning at all, particularly in the aftermath section. --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 09:12, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
- @Rsrikanth05: How does it look now? -- Thats Just Great (talk) 16:03, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
- @Thats Just Great: Looks better, but please do a final check for consistency. Some sentences have the words black and white starting with uppercase letters and some don't. Otherwise, I think someone can review this. --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 20:54, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
- OK. I addresed your points. -- Thats Just Great (talk) 21:20, 27 July 2019 (UTC)
Full review needed now that points in comments have been addressed. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:33, 30 July 2019 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright or plagiarism issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:29, 9 August 2019 (UTC)
