Template:Did you know nominations/8 Air Maintenance Squadron

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The result was: rejected by Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:06, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

8 Air Maintenance Squadron

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• ... that a member of 8 Air Maintenance Squadron was awarded the CDS Commendation for Heroism while on his day off?

5x expanded by Tartarus (talk). Self nom at 04:24, 26 August 2011 (UTC)

• Reviewed: Circle the Drain Tartarus ^talk 20:21, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

• Hook: Short enough, cited, somewhat interesting.

Article: New enough, long enough. Image is fine. Every paragraph has at least one citation, references seem reliable. "He has truly..." is not encyclopedic. Neither is "Since 2006 Exercise Green Flag has been an annual event that is all about tactical airlift training". Paraphrasing checks 1, 2, 3, and 4 show some major problems with paraphrasing. Canadian government works are still copyrighted under crown copyright, so they cannot be copied with impudence.

• Summary: Needs major cleanup for copyright issues and encyclopedic tone. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:52, 8 September 2011 (UTC)