Template:Did you know nominations/Aïn Kassimou

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The result was: promoted by Yazan (talk) 13:19, 22 November 2012 (UTC)

Aïn Kassimou

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... that Patrick Guerrand-Hermès created the Aïn Kassimou in the style of a 19th century Moroccan house for his passion for the arts and culture of Morocco where he lived for 50 years?

Reviewed: Industry on Parade

Created/expanded by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Nvvchar (talk), Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 17:30, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

Article only has 1440 characters of readable prose (DYK requires a minimum of 1500). The article citations could use some cleanup as the only difference between source 1 and 3 is the access date and source 4 is listed with a title of " accessdate=30 October 2012". Additionally, the last sentence of the "Grounds" section mentions two species of lilies but my browser's search capability is unable to locate where either species is mentioned in either of the two sources used to cite the section. --Allen3 ^talk 21:37, 13 November 2012 (UTC)

I deleted the mention of lilies as I couldn't find the ref to support them, cleaned up the citations, and expanded the prose. --Rosiestep (talk) 04:34, 14 November 2012 (UTC)

Good to go. I have performed some minor copyedits and removed a sentence that was not supported by the accompanying citation (or any of the article's other citations as far as I could tell), but with the expanded prose the article is still comfortably over the 1500 character minimum. --Allen3 ^talk 22:04, 21 November 2012 (UTC)