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The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:04, 20 January 2013 (UTC)

Affliction (Star Trek: Enterprise)

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Created/expanded by Miyagawa (talk). Self nom at 23:26, 16 January 2013 (UTC)

Expansion is fine; not a stub; hooks are fine (my own preference is for the original hook, I'm not 'into' Star Trek and that's the one that drew my attention!).

I fixed a couple of minor contractions - there are just a couple of very minor points I can't fix: a DAB link for ABC, I don't know which ABC it is; also should 'augment' read 'augmented'? Otherwise it looks good to me but as this is the first time I've tried reviewing an article for DYK I'd appreciate someone else also checking......thanks! SagaciousPhil - Chat 10:05, 20 January 2013 (UTC)
I've fixed the dab link to American Broadcasting Company. The augment thing is Star Trek lingo that was mostly introduced earlier in the season with the episode "Borderland". Basically they're the genetically engineered humans such as Khan from Star Trek II. My favourite hook is the first, with the second alt as a backup as they're less Star Trek centric and should grab a wider audience. Miyagawa (talk) 10:12, 20 January 2013 (UTC)
Yes, I thought it might be something like that (Trekkie technical, I'm not!)
Looks fine to me now. SagaciousPhil - Chat 10:19, 20 January 2013 (UTC)