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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:14, 20 May 2017 (UTC)

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Albert Pierce Taylor[edit]

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Created by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 03:30, 6 May 2017 (UTC).

  • Review underway. Long enough and new enough.
  • One problem is the hook fact needs a citation in the article at the sentence. MB 18:53, 6 May 2017 (UTC)
  • @MB: Done.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 19:41, 6 May 2017 (UTC)
  • Article is neutral, well cited, no copyvio or plagiarism detected. Hook meets requirements and is acceptable. QPQ review done. However, perhaps this is more "catchy":
  • ALT1 ... that Albert Pierce Taylor, author of Under Hawaiian Skies, failed to fight the Spanish in Cuba but succeeded in the Philippines?
MB 04:50, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
In my opinion, it just sounds weird? Maybe let just let the promoter decide?--KAVEBEAR (talk) 05:02, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
OK, that's fine. Since ALT1 is in the running, someone else should review that hook. MB 05:09, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
  • - reviewing ALT1 I see in the source Taylor was in active service in the Philippines and returned to Honolulu, Nov. 16, 1899. I am assuming this is the reference for ALT1 - if so, then should the inline reference be in the article directly behind the sentence ...he enlisted and fought in the Philippines. Or if I am mistaken, please point out to me that it is already referenced and I will review ALT1?--Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:48, 12 May 2017 (UTC)
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