Template:Did you know nominations/Alberto Corazón
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:31, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
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Alberto Corazón
... that Spanish designer Alberto Corazón was considered the father of graphical modernization in Spain with the advent of democracy after the death of Francisco Franco?Source: https://www.wionews.com/entertainment/lifestyle/news-spanish-graphic-designer-alberto-corazon-dies-aged-79-362764 https://elpais.com/cultura/2021-02-10/muere-el-artista-y-disenador-grafico-alberto-corazon.html
5x expanded by Ktin (talk). Self-nominated at 08:49, 11 February 2021 (UTC).
article is long enough (4112 characters), new enough (created 10 February, nominated 11 February), and article is within policy. Note that the article has appeared on Recent Deaths at ITN, but is still eligible as per rule 1d of WP:DYKRULES
Hook is short enough and interesting. However, in the article it says that he was "one of the fathers of graphic modernization", and this is supported by El Pais ("fue uno de los padres de la modernización gráfica"). Whereas the hook says that he was "the father of graphical modernization"- which implies he was the only one. Please can this be clarified?
QPQ not yet done. The user has 25 previous DYK nominations, so QPQ is required
Ktin please can you clarify the wording of the hook, and also provide a QPQ for this nomination? Joseph2302 (talk) 18:51, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
- @Joseph2302: Thanks. Will complete the QPQ later tonight. Re: the hook, sure, please feel free to edit / recommend an edit. Cheers. Ktin (talk) 21:22, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
- @Joseph2302: Added QPQ. Ktin (talk) 03:27, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
- For the hook, my suggestion is:
ALT1: "... that Spanish designer Alberto Corazón was considered one of the father of graphical modernization in Spain with the advent of democracy after the death of Francisco Franco?"(I've just added "one of" to the article). Is this okay by you? Joseph2302 (talk) 12:53, 18 February 2021 (UTC)- Thanks. Minor tweak -- lets make it "one of the fathers" i.e. fathers instead of father. If that is alright with you. Ktin (talk) 15:22, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
- That's fine by me, as it's correct grammar. ALT2: "... that Spanish designer Alberto Corazón was considered one of the fathers of graphical modernization in Spain with the advent of democracy after the death of Francisco Franco?
Good to go with ALT2- I have struck ALT0 and ALT1 so that it's clear to the promotor that ALT2 is the preferred wording. Joseph2302 (talk) 16:56, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks. Minor tweak -- lets make it "one of the fathers" i.e. fathers instead of father. If that is alright with you. Ktin (talk) 15:22, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
