Template:Did you know nominations/Argonium

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:29, 25 October 2016 (UTC)

argonium[edit]

Created by Graeme Bartlett (talk). Self-nominated at 01:25, 1 October 2016 (UTC).

  • @Graeme Bartlett: This article is new enough and long enough. The content is a bit beyond me, but I did wonder about the use of the word "molecule" in the hook. Would it be better to use the words "molecular ion" in the lead and hook as used in the source? The article is neutral and I did not attempt to identify any copyright issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:04, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
  • OK I have made alt1 using the term molecular ion. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 21:46, 14 October 2016 (UTC)