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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:45, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

Azeloprazole[edit]

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Azeloprazole spinning along an axis.

... that azeloprazole was designed with pharmacogenomics in mind? Source: "Azeloprazole sodium was synthesized to overcome issues associated with the metabolism of marketed PPIs by CYP2C19." (Toda R. et al. The Journal of Clinical Pharmacology. 2017;00(0):1–9. DOI:10.1002/jcph.1038.)

Comment: Moved from sandbox. About 1900 characters. Using DYK credit from Dominique Blake.

Created by Biochemistry&Love (talk). Self-nominated at 06:02, 26 December 2017 (UTC).

Interesting, on good scientific sources, those I can't access accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. For my taste, the short article has too many headers, please try to condense. It also wouldn't hurt to explain a few things in the language of the average reader, even if there's a link. The image is licenses and attractive, but the caption is very long. (I added a letter.) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:55, 26 December 2017 (UTC)

@Gerda Arendt: Thank you for your review! I tried to keep the headers per WP:PHARMMOS, but I understand that it does seem silly to have something like "Pharmacology" only include the "Mechanism of action." Do you still recommend condensing them? What sections do you think could benefit from additional clarity for the lay reader? The caption does seem a bit long; what do you think of it now? ―Biochemistry🙴❤ 03:29, 27 December 2017 (UTC)

I don't know how "stiff" the standard headers are. In music, I usually have "Text" and "Melody", but if one of them has little content I do "Text and melody". - I don't know proton pump inhibitor. First step to more readability would be to repeat the link in the body, second, a few words in the body about what that means, - if you don't want to loose readers at that point. Think about them ;)

--Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:08, 27 December 2017 (UTC)

@Gerda Arendt: Completed! Let me know if that will suffice. (: ―Biochemistry🙴❤ 03:51, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Thank you! Happy 2018!! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:26, 2 January 2018 (UTC)