Template:Did you know nominations/Battle of Kolubara

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:29, 16 November 2014 (UTC)

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Battle of Kolubara[edit]

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  • Reviewed: Not a self-nomination

Improved to Good Article status by 23 editor (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 21:22, 5 October 2014 (UTC).

  • Recently promoted to GA, all good. Just need to rephrase the hook and I'll accept it, which should be more interesting like "ended after a month with a decisive Serbian victory" or whatever you like. Just mention the duration of the battle because it is also an interesting thing that there were 22,000 killed in just a month of a battle, which is not a thing we hear daily. --Captain Assassin! «T ♦ C ♦ G» 14:48, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for the review. ALT1 suggested below. Oceanh (talk) 08:00, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
  • ALT1: ... that in the Battle of Kolubara in late 1914, which ended with a decisive Serbian victory, the Austro-Hungarians suffered about 30,000 killed, while the Serbs had 22,000 killed?
  • No no no, firstly I don't like its wording and secondly it should be less than 200 characters, even more shorter is better. Hook needs to be rephrased, do not mention the kills just put 1914 before battle's name and then mention that was ended with a decisive Serbian victory after a month of bloodshed --Captain Assassin! «T ♦ C ♦ G» 17:43, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Sorry for the delay, and it's good to go. --Captain Assassin! «T ♦ C ♦ G» 15:44, 16 November 2014 (UTC)
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