The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:40, 22 December 2015 (UTC)
Review Good to go! New article, timely nominated, moved for Coldwell's work space. Meets core policies and guidelines, and in particular: is neutral; cites sources with inline citations. DYK nomination was timely and article is easily long enough. Every paragraph is cited. No copyright violations, plagiarism or too close paraphrasing. Earwig's copy violation detector: Bernard H. Paul report gives it a clean bill. Hook is hooky enough, I think, and relates directly to the essence of the article. It is interesting, decently neutral, and appropriately cited. QPQ done. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 21:23, 28 November 2015 (UTC)
The sources say he "performed", not "produced", the first children's television show. I would write it this way:
ALT1: ... that puppeteer Bernard H. Paul performed the first children's television program? Yoninah (talk) 00:24, 21 December 2015 (UTC)
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Passes DYK checklist.
Good to go! New article, timely nominated, moved for Coldwell's work space. Meets core policies and guidelines, and in particular: is neutral; cites sources with inline citations. DYK nomination was timely and article is easily long enough. Every paragraph is cited. No copyright violations, plagiarism or too close paraphrasing. Earwig's copy violation detector: Bernard H. Paul report gives it a clean bill. Hook is hooky enough, I think, and relates directly to the essence of the article. It is interesting, decently neutral, and appropriately cited. QPQ done. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 21:23, 28 November 2015 (UTC)