Template:Did you know nominations/Caballeros de la Quema

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The result was: rejected by Fuebaey (talk) 16:16, 4 December 2014 (UTC)

Caballeros de la Quema[edit]

Iván Noble, leader of Caballeros de la Quema

Created by Cambalachero (talk). Self nominated at 16:34, 18 October 2014 (UTC).

  • Article is new enough, and questionably long enough (~1,390 characters without spaces, ~1,670 with spaces). Hook is short enough, neutral, and AGF on the source. QPQ checks off and image seems good. Hook seems interesting enough, though "singer pictured" may be a little much, assuming the picture is used at all. The article is neutral and cites sources (AGF on one of them). However, the entire first paragraph is very similarly worded to its source (which I ran through Google Translate). Although it may not be word-for-word, the sentence structure is identical, and this follows sentence after sentence. Unless all or most of the article is re-written to avoid close paraphrasing, this article cannot be approved. – Maky « talk » 21:32, 19 November 2014 (UTC)
@Cambalachero: It's been a week since this was last reviewed but no progress has been made to address the concerns raised. Are you still working on this or should I tag this as stale? Fuebaey (talk) 10:07, 27 November 2014 (UTC)