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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 06:31, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

Caludon Castle

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The remains of Caludon Castle

Created/expanded by HJ Mitchell (talk). Self nom at 01:18, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

Date, size, sources, image copyright check out. A well-done article, however I have a problem with the hook: the article states that the castle is a 14th-century structure ("rebuilt as a castle in 1305"), that the remains date from the mid-14th century reconstruction, and that prior to this there was a "house" or "manor" on the site, which in turn is clearly attested only since the 13th century. This is not the same as saying that the castle itself is pre-Norman. The hook should be rephrased accordingly. Constantine 18:50, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
Well the site is pre-Norman, and there have been several buildings there over the centuries, probably built from pretty much the same bricks. It could be rephrased as "is the only surviving trace of a pre-Norman site" or some such, but that's much less hook-y, and doesn't convey nearly as well that the most interesting thing about the place is the representation of c.1,000 years of history in that wall fragment. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 21:54, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
The site is pre-Norman, but not the castle. "... that a grey sandstone wall (pictured) all that remains of the 14th-century Caludon Castle in Coventry?" would be OK, or "... that a grey sandstone wall (pictured) is all that remains of the Caludon Castle in Coventry, whose history stretches back to pre-Norman times?", but the present hook is misleading. Constantine 05:21, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
I don't think it's misleading; it's just overly condensed, but I can see your point. Your second suggestion works, though. Just without the definite article—it's Caludon Castle, not the Caludon Castle (rather like Buckingham Palace isn't "the Buckingham Palace"). HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 15:15, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
Great! Then it's all go for ALT1 "... that a grey sandstone wall (pictured) is all that remains of Caludon Castle in Coventry, whose history stretches back to pre-Norman times?" Constantine 17:39, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
Thanks very much! HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 22:50, 30 August 2012 (UTC)