Template:Did you know nominations/Carling Campus

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:29, 14 May 2014 (UTC)

Carling Campus[edit]

Created by P199 (talk). Self nominated at 13:49, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Long enough, new enough, well cited, didn't notice close paraphrasing or other problems. Regarding the hook, given that the citations don't agree on the bugging (one article says former employees claimed there were bugs, another says no devices were found) how about this for an alt?
  • ALT2:... that Carling Campus, the future home of National Defence Headquarters in Ottawa, Canada, was rumored to contain covert listening devices?
— Preceding unsigned comment added by Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talkcontribs) 1:18 30 April 2014
  • Unsigned review, and it's unclear which of the two original hooks were reviewed (and whether one or both have problems). Need someone new to check the new ALT2 hook, plus another opinion on the original hooks would be nice. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:11, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

The following has been checked in this review by Maile

  • QPQ done by P199
  • Article created by P199 on April 23, 2014 and has 2544 characters (0 words) "readable prose size"
  • Article is NPOV, stable, no edit wars, no dispute tags, no outstanding talk page issues
  • Every paragraph sourced online
  • No bare URLs, and no external links used as inline sources
  • Original hook is stated in the article and sourced with Ref 4
  • ALT2 is stated in the article and sourced with Refs 8 and 10
  • Striking ALT1 as inaccurate
  • Duplication Detector check of online sourcing found no copyvio
  • Disambig links tool found no issues
  • External links tool found no issues
  • This is good to go. I prefer ALT2 as the more interesting hook. — Maile (talk) 21:44, 13 May 2014 (UTC)