Template:Did you know nominations/Carlos Balderas
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:30, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
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Carlos Balderas[edit]
- ... that Carlos Balderas, who is due to box for the United States at the Rio Olympics, is the first member of his family to be born in the country?
- ALT 1:
... that boxer Carlos Balderas began his career after being punished?
- Reviewed: The Torist
- Comment: Once reviewed this can be moved to the Olympic holding area. Balderas competes in the men's lightweight preliminaries on the 6th August
Created by Basement12 (talk). Self-nominated at 23:59, 22 May 2016 (UTC).
- The article was created and nominated during the same day, this meeting the "new" criteria.
- It does not appear to be a fragment of an pre-existing article or paraphrased from online sources.
- It is long enough and the prose is neutral.
- The hook is a bit wordy, I have proposed an ALT, but do understand that we need to be careful not to try predicting the future (there is always the possibility of injury or other hindrances) and words like "scheduled" are needed to convey that . Besides that, the hook is sourced and neutral.
- QPQ was completed.
: Overall, I think that it meets the criteria to pass. - Caribbean~H.Q. 14:36, 24 May 2016 (UTC)
- Caribbean H.Q. Good point on the length of the original hook, I've trimmed it a bit but still think it's preferable to the ALT. Thanks - Basement12 (T.C) 14:55, 24 May 2016 (UTC)
- It's ok, it wasn't something that could derail the nomination, just esthetics. - Caribbean~H.Q. 12:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
- Caribbean H.Q. Good point on the length of the original hook, I've trimmed it a bit but still think it's preferable to the ALT. Thanks - Basement12 (T.C) 14:55, 24 May 2016 (UTC)