Template:Did you know nominations/Cento vergilianus de laudibus Christi
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:05, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
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Cento vergilianus de laudibus Christi
[edit]- ... that Cento vergilianus de laudibus Christi, a Latin poem by Faltonia Betitia Proba, takes lines from the works of the Roman poet Virgil and rearranges them to be about Jesus?
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Created/expanded by Gen. Quon (talk). Self-nominated at 23:13, 1 December 2015 (UTC).
Detailed interesting work on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF. I don't like the 19th century image of Jesus in this context, - an older depiction might fit the time better. Look for an extra "crafted" in the lead. Could you mention in a hook that it's the work of a woman? I suggest to link simply to Jesus, because that's our article, and avoids repetition. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:41, 2 December 2015 (UTC)
- How about now? I couldn't find a good way to fit 'woman' in there, but I added her name. I also cut the repeated 'crafted', and switched some pics out (the one of Jesus is now from the 4th century AD, and the pic of Aeneas is more "hero-y").--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:05, 2 December 2015 (UTC)
splendid, thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:11, 2 December 2015 (UTC)
- How about now? I couldn't find a good way to fit 'woman' in there, but I added her name. I also cut the repeated 'crafted', and switched some pics out (the one of Jesus is now from the 4th century AD, and the pic of Aeneas is more "hero-y").--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:05, 2 December 2015 (UTC)
