Template:Did you know nominations/Citra Award for Best Director
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The result was: promoted by Ashwin147 (talk) 15:25, 4 April 2013 (UTC).
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Citra Award for Best Director
[edit]- ... that the Citra Award for Best Director, established in 1955, once went to November 1828?
- Reviewed: Watermelon stereotype
Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nominated at 11:32, 30 March 2013 (UTC).
Long enough, pretty new and NPOV, with AGF on Indonesian sources. However since it is given to directors, the hook should say "once went to November 1828's Teguh Karya". ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 12:27, 30 March 2013 (UTC)
- Not interesting if phrased like that. ALT1: "... that the Citra Award for Best Director, established in 1955, once went to Teguh Karya of November 1828? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:30, 30 March 2013 (UTC)
- The new hook is interesting but grammatically incorrect. BTW have you nominated this one for 1st April? ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 06:43, 31 March 2013 (UTC)
- No. What is incorrect? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:52, 31 March 2013 (UTC)
- "Teguh Karya in November 1828." It should not have "in". ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 14:31, 31 March 2013 (UTC)
- Which would be even worse. Perhaps "of November 1828. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:42, 31 March 2013 (UTC)
- I agree with you, "of November 1828" will be a good idea. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 06:51, 1 April 2013 (UTC)
- Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:54, 1 April 2013 (UTC)
Good to go! ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 07:07, 1 April 2013 (UTC)
