Template:Did you know nominations/Clifton Nicholson

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 13:15, 12 December 2012 (UTC)

Clifton Nicholson[edit]

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... that Coty Award-winning jewelry designer Clifton Nicholson currently breeds phoenix?

Reviewed: Big 4 (sculpture)
Comment: Slightly not-quite-misleading, but irresistible as soon as I saw the bit about phoenix in the Great Argus article... Shame April Fool's not for almost half a year...

Created/expanded by Mabalu (talk). Self nom at 18:49, 30 November 2012 (UTC)

Looks good to me; offline sources accepted in good faith. Love the hook! Mackensen (talk) 15:59, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

The hook is clearly not supported: the word "phoenix" does not appear in the article at all. The hook reads well, but the information in it has to be both in the article and specifically supported by an inline source. Under the circumstances, I think a full re-review will be needed once the hook issues are addressed. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:12, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

The Great Argus pheasant is also called the "phoenix", which is stated in the article on the Great Argus. So if I add "also known as the phoenix" to the article, that will be sufficient? Mabalu (talk) 21:15, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

References and phoenix mention added. Mabalu (talk) 21:40, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

Hook is now supported in the article and by inline citations. (You can't rely on what another article says, the article in question has to say it.) The rest of the article looks fine: more than long enough and well referenced. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:21, 3 December 2012 (UTC)