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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Victuallers (talk) 15:11, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

Coffee production in Jamaica

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Jamaican Blue Mountain Coffee

Created by Rosiestep (talk), Nvvchar (talk), and Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 19:46, 8 June 2015 (UTC).

  • Article is long enough with 2683 chars, and nominated on 7th day so new enough. Neutral, in-line citations, does not appear to have close paraphrasing. Hook is interesting (where can I get it?) and is 168 chars (omitting word pictured). I'm okay with the first part of the hook, but do not see a source for the claim that it "is mostly exported". The source says importer demand exceeds production but that doesn't necessarily equate to them exporting it. (It could simply mean that the government doesn't allow export, but people want it.) Photo appears to be properly released and available for any use per commons. SusunW (talk) 21:04, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
Perfect! GTG. SusunW (talk) 01:11, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
  • To my ears, the hook sounds too repetitive. Also, a number of citation needed tags have been added to the article. Yoninah (talk) 23:44, 4 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Thanks @Yoninah: All the citations have been fixed now. The references were already there at the end of each section. How about this ALT2 hook ... that Coffee export to Japan is mainly of Jamaican Blue Mountain Coffee (pictured), which is reported to be more than 80 per cent of its production?--Nvvchar. 00:43, 5 July 2015 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah:Do you want me to suggest another hook.--Nvvchar. 21:16, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
  • I just took another look at the article. There's a citation needed tag to take care of. Also, the article is top-heavy with a largely unsourced lead, and the rest of the article seems to be strung together too casually. If you could come up with a source for the beans being used as the base for Tia Maria liqueur, that would work as a hook. Yoninah (talk) 21:47, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah:. There is some mix up here. The lead has only two sentences and both are refrenced. There is no tag in the article. Probably you read the Jamaican Blue Mountain Coffee, which is not our article. The artcile also does not have any sentence related to the beans being used as the base for "Tia Maria liqueur". --Nvvchar. 23:34, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
@Nvvchar:I like hook 4, which is supported and am prepared to reapprove it if y'all are finished negotiating.SusunW (talk) 16:29, 8 July 2015 (UTC)
  • I agree with ALT4. Thanks.--Nvvchar. 19:16, 8 July 2015 (UTC)
Great! Then lets try this again. GTG SusunW (talk) 19:51, 8 July 2015 (UTC)