Template:Did you know nominations/Colegio de la Preciosa Sangre de Pichilemu

Add links
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 01:57, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

Colegio de la Preciosa Sangre de Pichilemu[edit]

(
)

Created/expanded by Diego Grez (talk). Self nom at 04:08, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

  • Couple of comments:
  • Not a huge deal, but WP:LEADCITE suggests that the lead not contain any redundant references that will appear in text.
  • I actually think the 2nd place ranking of the debate team, Kick-Ass, might make for a better lead here, but it's your call.
  • The facebook fan page under external links is not really appropriate per WP:EXTERNAL, so it should be removed.
Otherwise, I think it's in good shape. I, Jethrobot drop me a line (note: not a bot!) 07:45, 22 August 2012 (UTC)
Okay! I just did some changes per your suggestions. I propose the following hook:
Diego Grez (talk) 14:45, 22 August 2012 (UTC)
  • I think the article is in good shape. Another editor who has better proficiency in Spanish may want to review the references to ensure they are reliable sources, but the sample I checked out seemed sufficient, so I will AGF this one. I, Jethrobot drop me a line (note: not a bot!) 04:26, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
Retrieved from "https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Colegio_de_la_Preciosa_Sangre_de_Pichilemu&oldid=1022746703"