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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 20:44, 15 March 2022 (UTC)

Comtal

Created by DigitalIceAge (talk). Self-nominated at 07:14, 2 March 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - Not done
Overall: A very interesting read, I'd certainly not heard of this company before today, and also an intriguing hook. I'm a fan of both hooks, but I think the first one is a bit punchier. My only bit of input would be to perhaps leave out "surface of" and "flybys of" to give "...process digital images of Mars and Jupiter in the 1970s?" A minor thing, but I think that just flows a bit better. Other than that and the pending QPQ, the nomination looks ready to go. Fritzmann (message me) 17:44, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for the review Fritzmann! QPQ done. Here's your suggested alt:
Thanks again! DigitalIceAge (talk) 19:07, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
for ALT2, looks good! Thanks to you for a painless review and a well-made article. Fritzmann (message me) 19:24, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
ALT2 to T:DYK/P2