Template:Did you know nominations/Cosmetics in Korea

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The result was: rejected by Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 08:23, 29 January 2017 (UTC)

Cosmetics in Korea[edit]

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... that Korean cosmetics have been made since ancient times? Source: [1]

Created by Youkseo (talk) and Sunhwa Hwang (talk). Nominated by Youkseo (talk) at 02:34, 6 December 2016 (UTC).

size and age are ok, no copyvio detected, no QPQ required as new editors. Some referencing, blog appears to be notable person and content not too remarkable. However hook is vague and non-informative. Could apply to cosmetics anywhere really. Lead is also written in a vague and a promotional manner and needs to be rewritten. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:35, 10 January 2017 (UTC)

There has been no response in two weeks, and the nominator has not edited Wikipedia since December 6 (and co-creator not since December 1). Marking for closure, though if anyone posts a response here taking on the nomination's issues before this closes, the review can continue. Note that the "advert" template will need to be addressed. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:29, 24 January 2017 (UTC)