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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:36, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

Crying Girl, Hopeless (Roy Lichtenstein)[edit]

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nominated at 06:56, 12 June 2013 (UTC).

  • New, long, neutral, cited (both articles). Hook is interesting, though a little over 200 chars. I trimmed it. (Also "his" was ambiguous, so rephrased.) AGF on the Picasso text source, though it would be nice to include a quote within the citation since it's potentially controversial material. And the marital troubles source is supposedly a cribbed citation from a book (mentioned at the top). The Lichtenstein Foundation should be good enough for a reliable source, but using the original material is obviously preferable. Can you take a look at those nitpicks? Hook's good to go anyway. czar · · 05:32, 16 June 2013 (UTC)