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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 17:47, 22 August 2012 (UTC)

Cubana de Aviación Flight 9646

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A Cubana Ilyushin Il-62M similar to the one involved in the crash of Flight 9646

Created/expanded by Jetstreamer (talk). Self nom at 11:55, 9 August 2012 (UTC)

  • The hook is too long, can you please just shorten this to 200 characters? Zia Khan 18:53, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
  • I reworded the hook as suggested. Hope the new version appearing below is now of your liking. Just in case the image provided is used, I also modified its caption a bit. Thanks for your time.--Jetstreamer Talk 21:09, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
  • ALT... that the worst aviation accident occurred on Cuban soil killed 45 residents of a populated area and all 126 occupants of the aircraft when it crashed shortly after takeoff?
  • Article created in the last five days, length is good, neutral, hook (ALT) checks out. Zia Khan 21:48, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
  • Second opinion requested to verify the image used. Zia Khan 21:48, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
  • Should it be approved, may I request for this hook to appear on 3 September?--Jetstreamer Talk 22:20, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
  • I think so. Expand it a little more. Regards. Zia Khan 20:11, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
  • It's good for me. After all, the hook is intended to take the reader's attention and to get him/her to the article for the details.--Jetstreamer Talk 23:30, 15 August 2012 (UTC)