Template:Did you know nominations/Daisy Belmore

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The result was: promoted by Z1720 (talk) 14:21, 29 July 2022 (UTC)

Daisy Belmore

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... that actress Daisy Belmore disfigured her appearance for a character in a play so significantly that she was barely recognised in the street by audience members? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/clip/105793988
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Created by Bungle (talk). Self-nominated at 15:03, 22 July 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing: - First paragraph under 20th century has uncited information.
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Steelkamp (talk) 06:21, 23 July 2022 (UTC)

Thanks Steelkamp. I think what happened with the end of paragraph 1 is that I opted to split what was a larger paragraph into two, so the first cite in paragraph 2 originally covered both sentences. I have copied that cite to the end of P1 now, although it didn't have any material effect on the hook proposed. I also wonder if it's worth noting the year (1921) in the hook to give some period context? Bungle ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:59, 23 July 2022 (UTC)

Either way seems fine to me. I've approved this hook now. Steelkamp (talk) 07:05, 23 July 2022 (UTC)