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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 05:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

Daniel Clifford (chef), Midsummer House

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Created/expanded by Miyagawa (talk). Self nom at 22:12, 9 June 2012 (UTC)

  • Midsummer House: Minor copy edits. No copy vios. Sources reliable. Hook correctly formatted and cited. Article well-cited. Photo in article fine. Three small issues: 1) Substantial expansion, but I'm not certain that this is a 5x expansion (please keep in mind that I'm a newbie when it comes to expansions). 2) For your source #4, this sentence appears above the interview: "Since this interview was recorded Scott has left Midsummer House." I would recommend rewriting that small section to reflect the change. 3) You should link to your reviews of the articles that you indicated for this double nom.
    Review of second article to follow. Anne (talk) 01:00, 10 June 2012 (UTC)
  • It's gone from 202 characters to 2510 characters, a 12x expansion. I've removed the lines regarding the old head chef, and I've added the links to the reviews. Miyagawa (talk) 11:30, 10 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Great! You're good to go! Anne (talk) 23:29, 11 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Daniel Clifford (chef): Minor copy edits. Date and length fine. No copy vios. Sources reliable. Article well-cited. (So, just need to take care of the above.) Anne (talk) 03:32, 10 June 2012 (UTC)